Bài Kiểm Tra Môn Viết Cơ Sở I

Birgit Hanson lives in Denmark and has just got married. Just before her wedding she receved a gift of $ 1000 from the English family she lived with while she was studying in London. She is pleased and grateful. This is the letter she wrote. What's wrong with it ? Rewrite the letter.

                                                                                                  77 Westergade,
                                                                                                  Aarhus
                                                                                                  25 March 2005

Dear Mr + Mrs Abbot
Thank you for your gift

                                                                            Yours faithfully,
                                                                             BH

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                                                                                        77 Westergade St.
                                                                                        Aarhus,
                                                                                        Country Denmark.
                                                                                        25th March 2005

Dear Mr/Mrs Abbot,

    Now that I'm writing to thank you for all the help you gave me during I was studying in London. Thank you very much for a wedding present. It’s what I need for my wedding.

    I know I would never have been able to grow without the encouragement and support I received from you.

    I look forward to seeing you all when I visit English in next time.

    Well, I must rush now to catch the post. Do drop me a line when you have time. I miss you very much.

      

                Thank you again for your gift.

                Best wishes,

                Birgit Hanson